MK, your source is a really interesting piece of journalism and I think you gave great insights into the work, a source which I don’t think any of us had read before! It was also helpful how you set up the primary text to read like an ebook. As a suggestion to improve your project, I think it would have been a little more user friendly to have a completely separate site for your ADE. It just makes it a little harder to see your annotations and the text they relate to, but overall, great job!
MK, I appreciated your use of a separate source not covered in class. The source tied in well with our material this semester, especially on the topic of gender norms and their effect on exacerbating mental illness. If I were to change anything, it would be to add menus for your primary source, introduction, and reflection sections at the top of the page. I enjoyed your presentation and the depth you used to describe the narrative!!
MK, your source is a really interesting piece of journalism and I think you gave great insights into the work, a source which I don’t think any of us had read before! It was also helpful how you set up the primary text to read like an ebook. As a suggestion to improve your project, I think it would have been a little more user friendly to have a completely separate site for your ADE. It just makes it a little harder to see your annotations and the text they relate to, but overall, great job!
MK, I appreciated your use of a separate source not covered in class. The source tied in well with our material this semester, especially on the topic of gender norms and their effect on exacerbating mental illness. If I were to change anything, it would be to add menus for your primary source, introduction, and reflection sections at the top of the page. I enjoyed your presentation and the depth you used to describe the narrative!!