- My goals with my revision are:
- Make my essay have a better flow/cohesion
- rework paragraphs I’m not happy with
- Make the thesis more clear and make more sense
- Talk about my community’s thoughts on art more
2. The steps I will take are:
- make edits based on peer reviews
- Reread essay to check for things I’d rather change
- Consider moving around paragraphs
- Consider using different quotes/using quotes differently
- Reread essay on final time for surface errors
3. I think my biggest challenge will probably be trying to make sense of all of the different topics we have to cover in one essay. Maintaining any sense of personality and a unique opinion will be difficult because most of the essay will be taken up by mandatory analysis of sources.
4. If I come across a problem that I cannot solve on my own, I’ll try to see if there’s anything in They Say I Say or The Little Seagull that could help me. If I still can’t get my essay to where I want it to be, I can ask my writing lab instructor to help me with it.
I’m not sure if your analysis has to limit your ability to give your paper personality or opinion. Please reach out if you would like to talk about options. Consider rereading Armstrong with your choice angle in mind. This may help you identify moments where you can naturally place your ideas in meaningful conversation.